I think that you could improve by adding more colour into it, which would make it stand out more, and maybe a san serif text font as all the text currently looks near enough the same. Also its not that clear what the brand identity is at the moment.
I like the way its set out, its beginning to look like a magazine and with the coverlines with different topics is good.
It's definitely on its way to becoming a good magazine, just from the way its layed out currently you can tell that it's supposed to be a magazine.
I think that you could improve by adding more colour into it, which would make it stand out more, and maybe a san serif text font as all the text currently looks near enough the same. Also its not that clear what the brand identity is at the moment.
ReplyDeleteI like the way its set out, its beginning to look like a magazine and with the coverlines with different topics is good.
It's definitely on its way to becoming a good magazine, just from the way its layed out currently you can tell that it's supposed to be a magazine.